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A glooming peace this morning with it brings, The sun for sorrow will now show his head. Go hence to have more talk of these sad things; Some shall be pardon'd, and some punished: For never was a storm of more woe That this of Juliet and Romeo.
 * Prince**

Wait their love would not have brought them to their demise. Must we find the true happening of their death.
 * Capulet**

I know of this well read woman who might help us. She is a childhood friend of mine.
 * Nurse**

Do I know thy friend?
 * Capulet**

Dr. Temperance Brennan
 * Nurse**

//The next day//

Wow Bones (Temperance) I have always wanted to go to Italy. Unfortunately under these conditions.
 * Booth**

I don't understand what conditions. It's beautiful, sunny, and 27C.
 * Bones**

//Booth looking at her with a confused face//

The conditions of the MURDER?
 * Booth**

//Walking towards the group which is surrounding two bodies//

Um...i'm here for the dead body
 * //Bones//**

Art thy Temperance?
 * Nurse**

Yes,...Nurse?
 * Bones**

Ay
 * Nurse**

It has been so long.
 * Bones**

Ay,ay it has.
 * Nurse**

May I see the body.
 * Bones**

Ay you may.
 * Nurse**

//Nurse looking confused//

She is like that
 * //Booth//**

Tis like she were when she were young.
 * Nurse**

//Looking somewhat relived//

Female, because of her pelvic bone not ready for birth, i'd say she were an adolescent maybe 15.
 * Bones**

14, Tis fair Juliet and Romeo.
 * Nurse**

There is a stabbing wound in her upper ribcage. Her arm...
 * Bones**

Juliet.
 * Nurse**

Juliet's arm appears to have been forced into her chest.
 * Bones**

Tis a murder, death upon a sword? O Romeo... o that Romeo, he doth do mischef to my loved ones first Tybalt then Juliet.
 * Capulet**

Due to this man's body mass he would not have been able to cause such a strike. The man we are looking for is 1.82m and weighs 108kg.
 * Bones**

//All confused//

Approximately 6 feet and about 240lbs. This man...Romeo could not have done this. Although he does not show any form of death through a stabbing by the same person.
 * //Bones//**

//Back at the lab with the bodies Cam(Bone's boss) tries to do// //Romeo's autopsy to find a cause of death//

Wait you must stop.
 * Bones**

Why?
 * Cam**

We must ask for permission. I will ask for it.
 * Bones**

//At the Montague estate//

Art thou a lunatic? Thou may not!
 * Montague**

But it is essential to find the cause of his death. Please.
 * Bones**

//Whispers to Lady Montague and converse among themselves//

And thou must.
 * Montague**

Thank you very much.
 * Bones**

//Back at the lab where Cam is preforming the autopsy//

I found it.
 * Cam**

What was it that killed him?
 * Bones**

I dont know yet. But this is something that I have never seen in a stomach before.
 * Cam**

Run it through the Mass Spec to see what it is. (tool to find what is in an unknown substance)
 * Bones**

Minutes //later...//

Carbon and nitrogen
 * Cam**

liquid cyanide?
 * Bones**

Yep.
 * Cam**

Well i'd better report this to Nurse and the others.
 * Bones**

//A small place where the Capulets and the Montagues sit TOGETHER//

This case was a suicide and a murder. Capulets I am afraid to tell you that your Juliet has been murdered. Montagues Romeo was a suicide.
 * Bones**

//Sobbing and greif is seen in the crowd of the two families.//

We must stop this feud. Agreed?
 * Capulet**

Agreed. Tis what the two hath wanted.
 * Montague**

Four deaths is enough to forswear.
 * Capulet**

True
 * Montague**

//Bones and Booth return to the US and celebrate by drinking and having dinner at the Founding Fathers Pub.//

//Scene//

Enchiladaaa I know I'm not Chinese but I had to read this since I watch Bones. I think this was great! But I think that you should have something stopping them from going to the lab and have Nurse, Capulet, etc. come in a little bit more. Enchiladaaa that is a good idea but i would like to let you know that i might tweek it to having an opposition to the Autopsy.

This is really good. I agree with Enchilada and maybe you should add something from the Nurse and Capulet being surprised that they died the way they did. KUNGPAO

Great job! I thought your use of (I guess what you would call ) shakespearian vocabulary was very good in the first sections spoken by Capulet and Prince, but the three passages directly after that I think are a tad bit too modern. So maybe try to find good substitues for what you wrote after "true happening of their death" and before " the next day." In red is the word minutes which you accidentally left out the E for! I also thought you did an outstanding job with Booth and Brennans' characters; I watch the show and I feel as though you nailed bones' quirkyness to a T and Booth's explanatory ways. GENERALTSO1

I like it so far, i dont know the show, but it seems interesting, maybe add a part where capulet talks to montegue about it Master shifu