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The Lost Scene

//In the the town square//

//Enter// a young Lord Montague //and// Lord Capulet //clearly in a fight//

Montague: Thou hast betrayed me and defiled my kinsmen! Kinsmen-family (he speaks of his sister)

Capulet: She lies! I dare not deflower thine relative!

Montague: If thou insist on this lie, I will be forced to draw mine blade!

Capulet: We must not allow for her to do this friend.

Montague: Nay, it is you who has caused my wrath!

//He draws his sword//

Capulet: My dear friend, it hath been a decade since last we fought.

Montague: Ay yes! and it has been a decade of lies!

Capulet: Montague, you know that sworn are we from harm to each other. For we our friendship goes back to childhood! Oh how I wish this was a dream! I would not to harm thee dear friend.

Montague: Ah you remember the events of five years past! I do believe that this promise wilst be undone.

Capulet: You leave me no choice!

//They Fight, Capulet is struck on the leg//

Capulet: You have always been the superior to duel.

Montague: However, this one is real. I find the aspect of killing you unbearable. Farewell, mine old friend and newest enemy

//Montague Exits//

Capulet: Farewell my good man, today I have lost you to evil. For on this day we hath gone beyond the barrier of forgiveness. You have not only struck at my leg but my bosom. Ah I must go, doctor!

//Exit Capulet (limping)//

Senorita Burrito: I love the limping part! Maybe go a little more in depth about why they haven't fought or maybe explain a little about why the families are enemies.

Torilla soup: I liked everything, but I think you should explain how good friends they were and how this tears their families apart.