Enchiladaaa

Enchiladaaa and Mastershifu did a roleplay of a discussion the night before he must leave.

Setting: Juliets bedroom at midnight

Romeo: Juliet, I boast a horrible deed One that makes my voice tremble to speak it

Juliet: Romeo oh Romeo what hath thou done?

Romeo: I hath slain thy cous’n tybalt with my sword.

Juliet: Thou art a monster,why hath thou done this? (aside) yet such beauty lies beneath the trembles. How? You killed him, my favorite cousin!

Romeo: But he hath slain my own Mercutio, So, I was compelled to avenge his death.

Juliet: But the slain man was thy own family. we are wedded remember? Aye, Mercutio was fine man sure, but thou art no murderer of men.

Romeo: The solemnest words i have not yet spoke, The prince hath exiled me from fair Verona, such a fate is far worse then my own death, for I cannot bare to part’d from thee for this parting shall not be sweet just sorrow

Juliet: No, thou must not leave. A woman cannot live without her heart. Marry, This sorrow shall not be sweet m’love. Will'st I ever see thou again?

Romeo: Run from thy name and join me in mine.

Take my palm, long as we're together,

The fates will let us live long and merry.

We will run and ne'er will we look back here Juliet: How can I choose of my name and my love? let me think o’er night, it may be our last. Romeo: How then did thou beg me to forget mine?

Juliet: Yes, this I know, but I can't forget mine with tybalts death I must be there for my family. Aside :Romeo of all people I thought thou would understand

the pain and trouble the death has caused me

Aside: I can not believe he hath forced me to choose. He know death hath do us part for the moment I don't know what to do. I know Nurse will help me decide.

Senorita Burrito: I love it so far try and talk more about maybe foreshadowing something (maybe death) connect it with upcoming events

Tortilla soup: I liked it, but I think you should work on the wording and syntax a little bit more.

Senortaco: I found this scene pretty well done; however I agree with both Senorita Burrito and Tortilla soup as far as their comments. I also think that you could add a few other things just to make it slightly more interesting, a fight perhaps or and argument.